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Saturday, April 28, 2007

Parcel of feelings

Beyond the splash of lights, the night still is so absorbing
Beyond the concrete truth, this one dream is so convincing I want to be lost in this dream foever!!
Beyond the wired fences,the beauty of nature still sprawls
Beyond the annoying pieces of words,the innocency still exists I want to be lost in the mistery created forever!!

4 comments:

MaNi said...

a nice start...i'm still waiting for u to end this poem...paste the full version as n when u complete it

Innocency rests here said...

Sure SIR !!
Actually Inspiration Thing is missing!!
whn will get that it will run to completion .....same day !!!haha

Unknown said...

Gud one...
I would like to add on to this...
The one which I had in mind for some special in my life...
Here it goes...

Standing here gazing into each others eyes
feeling so happy we could cry
this is really a dream come true
besides the day when i first met you
you have brought so much joy into my life
and here you are now about to be my wife
you are my everything
there is nothing that our love wont bring
now here we are ... just me and you
its time to say i love you and i do
:)

Innocency rests here said...
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